Tayla’s Narrative
Slowly, a foot moved, then the trunk, then a loud growl shook the...ground and the ice started to crack slowly...a huge boulder of shimmery ice crashed onto the ground, the environment shook and the mountain growled and groaned.
BANG!The mammoth opened one eye and stomped on the man, he screamed and his guts came flowing out. Then the mammoth made a noise, that sounded like a bear then magically the man's guts, joined back together correctly. Now the mammoth and the man became friends. After they got to know each other, they went out for a picnic together
The mammoth ate mammoth food and the man ate ice-cream.
Tayla, what a lovely end to your narrative writing piece. I like your happy ending to the not so happy part! Well done for a range of vocabulary and punctuation to add suspense and depth to your writing! Next time perhaps you could write a sequel to the day after, are the mammoth and the man still friends?
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