I am a student at Yaldhurst Model School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, June 15, 2017
It was the day the moon fell to earth...
It was the day the moon fell to earth...When the moon fell to the earth it exploded to one thousand pieces. Everyone had to take cover even including the postman, the grocer, the soccer players. All though, they were in the middle of a soccer game. The whole of the city started to crumble, as everybody tried to escape but, they just couldn’t and so they just all tried to find the nearest underground shelter. As the moon came closer to Earth the world started to change shape, the sun came closer and the waves became bigger. True fact, as the moon is closer to the Earth the waves get bigger and BIGGER! This is how the waves felt they were like sharp knives digging into your back. They looked like slashing waves banging on a piece of metal.
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